First edit of Shots 2 to 8

This is the first edit we have done of Shots 2 to 8:

          

Because of the issue we had with the lighting, we decided to film shots 2 to 8 first as they were required to be filmed outside and we got a one-off chance to take time off school to film. After editing these shots, we showed our Media Studies teacher in order to gain Feedback.

We were advised to use more close ups and also to use a range of different shots from different angles. He also suggested using static shots instead of using camera movements. Also, we were told not to use a shot for longer than two seconds.

The editing stating “two weeks ago” was seen as inappropriate. This is because my teacher felt that the Font size was too big and Font style wasn’t right for the slow, ballad-like song. He also thought that red wasn’t suitable and said that removing this editing and portraying this in a narrative way would be better.

Below is this scene edited based on the feedback that we received: